Hi, I'm new here and I need a beta/inspirer person to kick me in the butt if I stop writing on my fic. Here are the stats for my fic.
Title: (None Yet)
Author: Mistress-Miyuki
Fandom: Yuugiou
Summary: Bakura Ryou has been going to therapists for most of his life, but when he endangers his life, he is sent to an adolescent unit called GreenOaks. There he meets a strange girl named Azriel who shows him the good side of GreenOaks. Eventually, though, he will have to leave and the therapists won't let the two see each other. (Insert cliche sentence to the effect of "What will they do?")
-Mistress Miyuki
I'm trying to think of a title for my story, and I'll admit that I don't have great vocabulary, so in my quest, I went to thesaurus.com.
I found the word 'presentiment' and I'm wondering if the way I used it is done correctly.
The title is "Presentiment of a Life Unwanted."
Does it make sense?? Thanks.
Hey I've been working on a ratherlong fan fiction and it just doesn't suit my tastes... I've gotten positive reviews from a few fans, but I just feel something isn't quite right...
If anyone is interested comment and I'll give you background on the fiction in question.
My story is called "the web" (as in spider web) and i am having difficulties. I want to know if it is worth working on. I dont want someone to correct all my punctuation and all that. Just a good opinion. Here is a short summary and if you are interested email me at vampirefamine@comcast.net (i am not going to post 32 pages)
"Rei Hikari has a moment of fame due to the sucess of her father's club that she runs with the help of her two closest friends. Thanks to her fame, she meets Seth Rikks, a rich handsome bachelor and falls in love. However, he is much more than he seems. With a dark past, secret machinations, and pure intentions Seth sparks the fire that ultimately leads to a tragic soap opera horror. Meanwhile, Leonardo Nithnellem, has his own agenda to finish what was started three thousand years earlier. As betrayal and interconnecting web weaves between all the good friends they find they have more in common than life ever intended.
This isn't your average love story dealing with serial killers, suicide, and an ancient egyptian twist. The story follows a cast of rather 'colorful' characters ranging from happy-go-lucky to split personality psychos. They hadn't expected that every stranger they come in contact with had ties that run deeper than blood.
Everyone on earth is related."
That is my summary. Please email me if interested.
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